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Society and the dialogue lives

 

Middle school student afraid of writing, listen to composition, at once like through eggplant of frost, vertical to regard as, blow the intestines thin 3, entangle appear 1.5 brains, paper still large stretch of " virgin land not cultivated " . cheap mp3 playersMoreover, the present Chinese teaching materials mostly regard humane topic as the unit and make the basis up, ignore the composition and train the building and constructing of the system, in addition the text lacks the reference value trained, cause the composition to train a hammer and a hammer of the west in the east, and then feel that goes, the few, slow, difference, fee of the composition are in accordance with expectation.

I think, we must review oneself more.

The first, lie in a lot of students lack the good writing attitude, it is general to regard the writing as Mount Qomolangma too high to reach, make psychological pressure artificially, pinch and suffocate to stand up while being all life, clever thought, abundant emotion that move that is should substantial, become pale and unable, overwhelmed with sorrow. So, reject all psychological chronic illness about the writing, cast off restrictions, " my handwritten my heart " ,Look on as one of the important prerequisites that is the writing. Only in this way, could keep a calm heart, talk with literature, talks with life, talk with oneself, and expand the visual field in talking, ferment the emotion, sublimate the thought, let the pen and ink play an outstanding role in.

The second, lie in some students lack correct writing to know, thought that the several kinds of so-called skills are grasped, the writing will advance by leaps and bounds, at a tremendous pace. They hope to wake up from a sleep some day very much, the ones that have gracefulness, Li Dazhao of Lao She's indifferent to fame or gain, Bing Xin's graceful and restrained, Zhu Ziqing are robust, often unwilling to proceed with base, but bent on attempting to use the gaudiness of the speech the ornate writing, to cover up the moaning and groaning without being ill of the content. Whole page article, like what the ancient said, " like seven treasure tower, dizzy human eye eye, dismantle, break to pieces, get off, do not become the passage " . " two orioles ring the green willow " --Scarcely know what one has said, " blue sky on the delegation egret " --I wonder if one ends. Pursue the skill completely, is tantamount to climbing a tree to seek fish, attending trifles and neglecting essentials.

The third, lie in more students lack essential life to take care of. In the face of the boundless universe, all living things, but is just closing eyes and has not seen, miss Heaven carrying one's own ears, unwilling to eat the firework of human world. Want them to incorporate life, savour life, express and paint from life alive, has really undertaken to do what is apparently beyond one's ability. Xin Qiji says " the teenager fails to see the flavour of worrying about, loves one storey of buildings. Love one storey of buildings, say in order to compose the neologisms strongly that worries about " ,Can also often find and confirm in student's exercise so far. If writing have any skill really, " whether ask canal to be then clear to let, for have source running water come " so ," the paper can come up, know definitely this wants the bow to walk " ,It is the only effective means that people obtain with the personal experience.

The properties of Chinese discipline, have determined the natural extensive connection between Chinese and life. Deng open up " Yanshan Mountain night " have pieces of article ask " everything care ", make a copy of Ming Dynasty east leader of forest partisan a pack of antithetical couplets of Gu Xiancheng: "The rumour, patter of rain, sound of studying, each are pleasant; Family matters, national affairs, affairs in this world, care about everything " ,Bring the basic demand that is taken care of to life as students, can't be more proper. The composition is of low quality, three reasons described above, the most important one is the third, there is not one pair " Good at finding beauty " Eyes,it is for ones that describes necessary person, thing, know little about or not getting more strange totally scene, thing, even skillful woman embarrasses and cooks a meal without rice. For example, the article is a mirror, it shone upon out, can only be the real life. In " Journey to the West ", immortal's Buddhism one, all sorts of evil-doers, how peculiar, have only moved person and thing in the mortal world to the sky, underground.

In short, if want to finish the composition, must learn and live and talk first, the person who is ambitious or tenacious of purpose doing manual labour.

Ye Shentao has said: "Should narrate the things, must know them first, understand them, this only works hard to observe. " Do not no doubt lack in life the river overflowed its banks, earth-shaken, heroic and moving, but ordinary, trifling. But so long as it have or can excavate, happen a certain meaning, can the child is father of the man, " see spirit in the slight place " ," listen to the thunder in the silent place " ,Drive by me, is used by me. Thinker Han Feizi, " the sage sees littly in order to know to sprout, sees the end in order to know the end " ,This reason pointed. All this can be found everywhere. " children's interesting " li one " Watch mosquitoes like the crane " , " whip shrimp Ma " It is two very ordinary things, but let readers experience infinite children's interesting in smiling to smile at. " the figure has been " described " I " One figure of father, getting simple a transparent spring of picture, nearly aware of something, because of the particular complex of that particular era too, and impregnate the dense father love, read to make people surprised. Checoff catches a piece of trifles especially " The minor matter " ,Particularly good at satirizing, delineate police officer to be clear to slight Love to be messy and disconnected " the dog bite people " Case,it reveal he take advantage of by downing, trim one's sails, changeable lackey look at being the charming. They, good at incorporating life, and with a " office middleman " The visual angle, hold these details that others perhaps turned a blind eye, as throwing into the emotion, expressing the carriers of the thought, write out the fine piece of writing with deep pieces of implied meanings.

The heavy earthquake of Wenchuan this time, the scene is miserable, losses are enormous, for being rare in the world. Rush to deal with an emergency in the course in antidetonation, there are too much touching details: What stretched held the hands of the pen, the schoolbag arranged neatly and cleanly by a pile of broken walls tightly in a piece of rubble, one stained with getting pale school badge of dust, all without exception very heavy to bump into every Chinese heart, make people shed silent tears, imprint on the bones and inscribe on the memory, does not forget prolongedly. If such a report on net: "Rescue personnel see a woman dying in an accident, is getting down on both kneels, both hands are supported, mp4 playertight a bow unexpectedly. Found later, her child lay under her body, just 3, 4 months old, the hair has not been wounded. A message which people read and filled in child's quilt expert machine screen ' dear treasure, if you can live,must remember I love by you ' when,it is cry one after another not to can't help. " Later, many TV stations did " united like one man, asked the calamity in antidetonation " The programs, all use " treasures: Mother loves you " It is a theme word, it serves to show this detail has caused the strong sympathetic response of countless people with shaking regret enormously.

Mr. Ye Shentao has also said: "Life such as well up by spring, article such as brook, fountainhead full and round, brook day and night interest lively naturally. " Some students, iPhone Accessoriesimmerse oneself in " study " all day ,The family, school become Line one at two o'clock, have already lacked the chances of contacting social life of a distance, if does not hit out voluntarily, find the true, the good and the beautiful in life, it is transient not to interfere them, disappear in a flash, it is more unable to come to write out the high-quality composition rich in the true feelings. Walk close to life, observe carefully, learn and live and talk, savour the true essence of life from the slight place, generous understanding of life, finish of composition want justice really.

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